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jenni and jeff
loved eachother to death
and said they would never part

but one faitful day
little jenni moved away
and it was a sad hour for both

fast foward two years
full of phone calls and tears
when at last they met again

with one touch to the lips
and hands on her hips
and the love was brougt back

the weekend did end
even though they would met again
there were tears down jennis face

Jeff wispered one thing
and gave her a ring
and it held a promiss to met soon

fast foward eight days
jenni and jeff in a haze
and they met sooner than thought

jenni was amazed
and jeff did gaze
for a few minutes atleast

jenni grabbed him and held him close
and this was what they loved the most
and from then on they did not speek

because parting was such sweet sarrow
they planned to spend tomarrow
not out of eachothers gaze

on that day
jeff was having trouble trying to say
jenni will you marry me?

she could not seek
the right words to speak
so just nodded her head and smiled

as time went on
their love was not gone
and they never had problems

so yes, jenni and jeff
loved eachother to death
and no, they never did part
©2007-2009 ~wishingforrain
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i thought it was really cute

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:iconpixel-demon:
Aww... this is tremendously touching! Quite cute... well done :clap:
:iconwishingforrain:
thank you

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:iconandthethruthis:
It is cute. And might I add having The Ice Dance from Edward Scissorhands playing while reading this was amazing.

There are a few spellin mistakes you might want to check up on.

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"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different.

You just know that your name is safe in their mouth."


Billy - age 4

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